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Reviews For: Illorian Wars
Sharpes
2004-08-21
ch 2, 		Interesting story so far. I wonder who or what was making that noise. Update soon.
mispel
2004-08-07
ch 1, 		Nice start. Great opening description. “vast womb of space” is a little much, but the rest of that paragraph is really good. Looking forward to more.
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