hey! thanks for the review. i had no idea how to word the last line so thanks for the correction!

-kay-

p.s. good luck with your writing. are you new to fictionpress? i see you only have 4 entries.

Sounds like an interesting trip. I thought your description of your car ride to Quebec was one of the best I have ever heard. I could really picture it.
The "Pierre" incident was extremely hilarious.
On the flip side, the story kind of jumped around and didn't make much sense in some parts.
Good job overall. Bravo.

Neato!

I've been to Quebec once...but I didn't stay, I was only passing through. I flew there, then drove out to this ski resort out in the mountains someplace...it was lots of fun, but now I wish that I'd also gotten to know Quebec a bit better. Oh well, maybe next time...

Anyway, from a technical point (since this is a review, and I must keep at least the fiction that I'm reviewing in order to improve your writing), this was ok...although yeah, the verb tenses jumped a bit, and it wasn't in chronological order.

Btw, how'd you know that the waves were "whispering about something sad"? I mean, how can the sinking of some boat change the sound of the ocean?

It sucks that you're on pills...I've never taken pills, never had to, and I don't like them. You seem to dislike them for the same reason I do: if you act the way you act because of foreign chemicals that you ingest to change your behavior...then is it really you anymore?

It sucks that you're alone when surrounded by friends...it's a horrible feeling.

Anyway, glad you're back!