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| Poetrybay 2005-02-04 ch 1,  | abusethis sounds so good it's a new year please update soon. i would like to know is ahe going to fine true love at the end because you're leaving me in suspense please update soon. in yes you should continue this, this is really good i might add please let me know if you're going to update soon. |
| CrazeeGirl 2004-11-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is good I'm glad she left him |
| AGermaine 2004-10-26 ch 1, | abuseGood start to a story! Do update soon, i'm very interested to know about Dakota and Calvin (: |
| :) 2004-09-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat's a great beginning. You have me intrigued. Now update soon so I can find out more about Dakota. |
| Matt91 2004-09-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was a great first chapter! Calvin is so evil! How could he do that to Dakota? She's his wife, not his doormat! Yes, I want you to continue! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! |
| bklyangel 2004-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abusecant wait to see where this is going |
| kaika switched 2004-08-17 ch 1, | abuseAw, I want you to continue! I really like Dakota so far and her little issue with Calvin seems like a good plot-line. Keep writing! |
| The Heartbreak Mixtape 2004-08-08 ch 1, | abusethis is really wonderful.and i hope you continue it.it's something i can relate to. |
| TiGeR-BaBe1989 2004-08-08 ch 1, | abuselove it so far!! i hope you do something about that ex!! well cant wait until your next update! hope you update sooner rather then later!! |
| BellezAzul 2004-08-08 ch 1, | abuseYAY! I am so glad that you finally got this story going. LoL Even though I read it first, but ya know! LoL UPDATE SOON... lets kick Dakota's ex's butt... right now! |
| hesfb 2004-08-07 ch 1, | abusegood beginning i like this story.. hope you update soon :) |
| Ayn is not Ann 2004-08-06 ch 1, | abuseCiao ragazza! I really like this story, and I'm not just saying that because I know you, I really do like it. I can't wait to find out what happens next! And yes, I am working on updating my story. Sheesh...you two are worse than slave drivers. :D Oh, and Diego says that he knows you'll uphold the honor of his car in your story because if you don't, Killa will decapatate you. lol...how nice. |
| punkrockprincess900 2004-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseawesome so far...keep it up |
| jaslovessean 2004-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love it! Keep it coming! |
| Kalanu Citlali 2004-08-06 ch 1, | abuseWoo hoo! I love this story already, but I kinda have an inside scoop on the whole thing, so I'm very biased. :D I want to thank you for using 'the name'. I can't tell you how much it means to me. It's almost like I'm confessing to the world how bad of a person the real guy was. It's also kinda interesting how you didn't even know that happened to me, you just asked me for a name. :D In the words of our beloved Ayn; 'Strange ** happens.' Keep up the good work! |