I liked this one a lot, but for some reason I kept noticing the word "tonight" popping up a lot. I'm not sure about that one.

I remember the old days when you used to obsesse about this.D.

really incredible! this is written in the sort of egnimatic way that touches the surface but also touches deeply. this goes to my favorites list.

There are so many works to choose from! :o). The title drew me into this one...obviously. I had to read this twice. You did a great job splitting the lines. :adds "FaithlessJuliet" to favorite authors list and author alert:
Keep writing

wonderfully, mystical, inspired! loved this!

great imagery keep it up but i don't really understand -"

this excellent but wonder what inspired you to write this. just wondering so please don't boil over. thanks for sharing and keep writing!