wai wai Vampires da yo!
heh sorry the dew and mini pwdered doughnuts are messin with me.
I really like it, I have the urge to smack Ewan for not being home for Tabby. And feel slightly bad for the lady, but she was stupid for acting all haughty when she was privy to hearing about tabby being missing.

Thank you so much for the review and those ever so needed fixes. (^-^) I can always use the help!

Ok, before I start...
Couple of mistakes I noticed,
"Why are looking for such people?"
'My parents were born and raised there, but I left when to study abroad'
'I felt my stomach churn from utter fear as ran from room to room'
'up stairs' I think that's one word.
'the tears still stinging my eyes as I round the corner that led to Tabitha's room'
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Now that's over with
I really liked it. Good opening, gets the reader interested.
I love Adrians character.
The building up of the characters is good, we already know a little of their backgrounds...
I love the way the suspense is built up when Donovan is searching the house. Good detail, it's easy to picture all the rooms in disarray.
The 'dinner' scene is just lovely!
'hearing a sickening crack as she landed on her neck'
'I dug my nails into her neck, feeling her blood beading around my fingers as I tightened my grip' Love these lines.
If you're posting anymore of this please let me know, i'm a very curious person and i'll be wondering how they find her...
Good start.