|Reviews for Perfection|
| enjoy the silence 1/13/06 . chapter 1
aww so cute. I'm extremely religious so I'm really loving your poems. I love the last two lines. Very nice ending.
| keltica 9/21/04 . chapter 1
Hmm ... the poem which is most open for debate is the least commented, actually not commented. I got to you through some reviews you made on author-at-heart stories I think. I read most of your poems but I want to comment this one, the idea of an ignored poem is irritating. You have a very personal style, not hiding behind techniques gives to us by poets of yore (this is my case :P) although I think for a poem whose aim is to discuss such an existentialist theme you should make the language higher, which would me more appropriate. I really liked the Valley poem ... hope to hear from you soon