COrrections:
Prologue- not noticeable so= not noticeably so
who the gossips answered to = whom the gossips...
Ch. 1- before then ti was= it was
CH.2- how owrried he was= how worried (but owrried is a cool word too)
Ch.4- clothing went in the draws= in the drawers
Ch.6- a task is to great= a task is too great
CH.9- agreed, quiet soberly= agreed, quite soberly
Ch.10- hmm...I have 'scraping her knuckles written down but I can no longer tell whats wrong with it...
sometimes were chose to= were chosen to
ch.11- it the one spoken by= it was the one spoken by
ch.13- next to Aria's empheral= Aria's ephemeral (but ephemeral is not the word it think you want- it means fleeting and transient...perhaps transcendent would be better?)
people where blades= people wore blades
Ch.14- if we lef the retreat= if we left the retreat (probably- difficulty reading my handwriting...)
Ch.15- at all surprised or consternated= or concerned (once again, probably, I'm not sure if consteernated is a word...)

No corrections after this because I lost my piece of paper- soz. But I didn't spot too many errors anyway (and I had to look Ephemeral up, btw).
Just checking, does IB stand for International Baccalaureat or some other weird and wonderful educational creation? Here we can do IB or NCEA (National Certificate of Educational Achievement).

Anyways- thanks muchly for the stories, and if the sequel is never finished then I will fly halfway around the world...to some vague destination in...Canada? And throttle you. Personally. If you would be so kind as to email me your address first...?
Bye bye, and keep writing coz u have a worldwide fan-base now!

Sorry it took so long to review. I really did read it when it came out, but I had no time to review (I don't like to post quick ramblings. ^_~). And then, I got all chaos-ed up in graduation and summer camp (my computer-less job), and moving into college. So now that that's all done, I can review again! yay!

I've not got too much to say other than I loved it. I'm sure that even if I had a constructive criticism, it would've just been a repeat from an earlier chappie. But I do seriously love your writing--that had better not have been an ant (we're fighting an infestation)-- and hope that you keep it up, even if it's not necessarily with these characters. I'm going to go check your bio now just to make sure you've not snuck anything else in over the summer.

As for the survey, while I do remember the general story and characters, the details have fuzzed somewhat, so I regret that I cannot finish it tonight. Don't be too surprised if I do it another day, though, and e-mail you the results. ^_~

ermm.. i couldn't find the place where shadow said he would wear the old Shadow's costume if Sarah became a fey Queen. only where he said, i quote,

"I hate them with the passion of ten enraged Fire's'guardians. I have no idea what the last Shadow to live in these parts was thinking when he left those clothes, but if he had any sanity it was something along the lines of ‘Lady bless, I’m finally rid of them.'"

I love that quote...

anyway, where did he say he would wear the clothes if she became a fey Queen??

:) CD

Where have I read number three of the RFR quotes? other than here. Maybe I haven't read it anywhere but here. But I could have sworn I had. What does RFR stand for? I'm rereading old favorites so that's why you're getting this review. I love your stories. When are you going to put up The Gryphons? When are you going to put up the next Fate's Songs book?

:) CD

This is a great story!! I love the way you've written it and all the characters are amazing.

Survey:1. Stormwing! She is a totally kick butt woman/dragon2. Shadow. 3. I really didn't like Nick...I think that's the Green who was mean to Kit...4. Dunno5. When the Guardians go to the fey place and meet Ravensong...Stormwing's brother6. Kit and Sarah getting together7. Sarah not being a Guardian8. Nope! oh wait...when's the next one gonn a get posted??

sarah

kit and shadow tie

All the greens (tie)

what was stormwing doing?

"You said you would wear it!"

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er... what happened to Stormwings world?

:) CD

Your writing is excellent. The plot that's introduced is really interesting and I will definitely read more soon. great job! :)

*laughs* Review 190! What a coincidence! *shrugs* Well, all you need is for a new reader to review at least 10 chapters. THEN you'll get to 200. ^_^ I'll try to force people to read/review this. Hmm, maybe Casey... *plots*

Anyway, I loved the "mine and mine and mine and mine and mine..." bit, and how you included PYR *beams* and that Kit and Sarah aren't together but have a great relationship anyway, and just... everything. Including the ending. Kit's so cute. *grins* Cuddly cute, you know. Not OMGSOHOTT cute.

So, the survey...

Favorite female character- Um, probably Sarah. I'm not too good with liking female characters, but she was pretty cool. And I've got a really nice mental picture of her in my mind, thanks to the wings. *nods*

Favorite male character- Pyr, obviously. Because he's Pyr. *grins* Kit's a close second, though.

Least favorite character- Um... the guy bullying Kit at the beginning. Because bullies ** me off.

Most confusing moment- I can't really think of anything in particular. *rubs eyes* It's too late at night.

Favourite scene- Um... Any with Pyr? Once again, can't think of any in particular.

Part you wished would have happened- *laughs* More Pyr. (Wow, notice a theme to my answers? Yeah, me neither.) Kit and Sarah getting together probably would have been fun, but I actually liked that you left their relationship the way it is for now.

Part you're glad didn't happen- Um... can't think of anything in particular.

Any remaining questions- I don't think so.

So, I hope you'll post the next installment of this soon!

-glares- Took you long enough! lol. Good ending. -dances just for the sake of showing off- I'm going to Italy! Too bad the pope already died...Great, we get to meet Benedict...lol w/e

1 – Favourite female character. Sarah

2 – Favourite male character. Shadow or Pyr

3 – Least favourite character (evil and not evil?) No clue

4 – Most confusing moment. Dunno

5 – Favourite scene "Mine and mine and mine and mine..."

6 – Part you wished would have happened. You think too much of me.

7 – Part you’re glad didn’t happen. Hehe...dunno

8 – Any remaining questions? Nope none. You're awesome!!

I LOVE Satan!!TTYL

Wow. I cannot believe it is the end! Here's to hoping you come up with a good plot for a sequel!Really? My constant urging got you to finish it? Wow! I guess I am a little proud! =) It was a good ending. *tear* I am soo sad its over. I will review anonymously and fill out the survey thing, but right now I have to go practice piano...i have competition on wednesday and I don't have everything memorized...=POOPS! lol.

Hey Gryph,

Yeah, I do admit it has been a while. I've been more focused on work, not on writing lately. I'm not dead I can tell you, but I'm working on the next chapter. I'm just honestly thinking about where the story is going right now. I'm also trying to write about other things, for example FBI stories/conspiracies, I don't just want to stick to Medieval Fantasy or Zombie horror. I've been trying, and an example of that is The Door, my story.

Now, about Fate and Fire. I must congradulate you for the completion of the story! It's been a fine run, and I'm waiting for the next one, crossing my fingers that it'll come out soon. Take your time, make it as good as the second and first ones.

Keep writing always.

-Alareic-

PS. I feel like this sounds like a goodbye letter, but it isn't! :P

I'm answering the survey before doing the review. Me don't know why.

1. Aria2. Shadow of course.3. err, I don't know.4. the whole thing :P. Kidding. 5. Where Sarah saves Kit from the green group?6. Aria and Shadow kiss . . .lol. i don't think that happened. 7. Umm, Sarah dying. 8. not that I can think of. oh wait, what was with the thing that aria and stormwing were doing with their magic?

Review time . . . .

*dances* Sarah is the fire queen. So happy. Haha, her mother seems freaked out at all this. Poor Kit. I wouldn't want to go after having all that fun, being in a war and all.

Ok, ok, so i didn't think it would be one last chapter. You're unpredictable, I don't know how many chapters to expect from you. Lol, You're like me. Only i started to write the last chapter for Wars of earth and then halfway through I realized i had just written a chapter for Memories to Come. But you'll still have to wait for Wars to be finished.

Lata.

I'd take your survey but I'm completely wiped out and in need of crashing into bed and not waking up for several long hours. But I would like to say that this book/series is absolutely fabulous and I absolutely hope you continue it! It's so freaking good!

*smiles* Chicken noodle soup- an awesome way to wake up, if it's the good kind. And I'm sure that Kit would provide nothing less than the best. ^_^ He's cute, you know. And he needs to take some rest himself. *concerned look* *relieved sigh* Oh, good, her wings aren't gone. Having them suits her, I think... *sulks* Well, at least we get an apology relayed from Pyr. But I want to actually see him in the story. *realizes she's behaving like a child but can't quite help it* *long pause* Ooh! Ooh! He's here! *beams* Wow, apparently if I pout enough, I WILL get what I want- in online stories, anyway. ^_^ Heh, poor Kit. Forced to eat good food. *pets him* *laughs* Don't tell me that no one guessed she was the fire queen AGES ago. I've known since... um... Aria's book. *grins* Hehehe, poor Shadow. That's what he gets for speaking before he thinks, I guess. *laughs*

I understand what you mean about short chapters, and about stories with more events than plotlines. That's how my new one's working so far- it should be good once two of the characters actually get together. Until then... ah well. I'll think of something. And so will you. ^_^ I have faith in you. And it's more than 176 reviews now. If you post a few more chapters, you'll reach 200. *grins* And then we can throw a party.

Anyway, I'll try to review on time next time. I really, really will. Please forgive me for all the delays! *is ashamed of self*

*sighs* Poor Shadow. Poor Kit. (Am reviewing as I go along) I hope she'll wake up... Oh, okay, now I'm at Sarah's part. *reads* 'Poor' Sarah, leaving the dark place- but at least she went somewhere pretty. ^_^ Hmm, it's this guy again! *Grins* Yay, a mention of Pyr! I want to see him in the story soon. *adores Pyr* Ooh, it's Alsan! *grins* Fun, fun twist... And to think that she may be distantly related to him! ^_^ And yay, she's coming back! *is happy* Not that I doubted she would, but still...

Aww, poor Shadow Gryphon. *pets* I hate being sick. It's icky. I hate school even more, though. *sighs* I miss asterisks, too. At least they still work in reviews, though. *smiles*

Well, the reason is that we all bicker over getting online. But there are five of us, after all- and no, I don't bicker about it. If my siblings challenge me, then I'll argue. A lot. But otherwise I leave well enough alone. *smiles* Male characters are the best, aren't they? *pets Pyr*

lookin gup - This is located somewhere in Shadow and Kit's part. I'm so hypocritical for pointing out spelling errors *laughs at self* but that one really jumped out at me. Perhaps because 'gup' sounds so strange. ^_^