  srzzz 2007-09-27 . chapter 6 hey ... good work ... i like the story line
just make sure you dont stuff the reader with loads of information in like one minute. it can get confusing and boring sometimes.
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srz |
| srzzz 2007-09-27 . chapter 4 Yeah well i didnt like that allen guy anyways... |
| srzzz 2007-09-27 . chapter 3 1hey! cool story... going to keep reading |
  .following.black.doves. 2007-09-27 . chapter 1exciting ...! |
 Beautiful Pixie 2007-03-09 . chapter 12this is a really good story. |
 Adaku 2006-12-23 . chapter 12Hm...interesting storyline so far. I'll be waiting for more. Till Next Time |
 Lovecupid 2006-11-04 . chapter 11I like this story |
 Keeper of Myths 2006-03-01 . chapter 11'tis a good story. I like the idea of how the Greek Gods are mixed up in the mess. Keep up the good work. |
| amelia 2006-02-22 . chapter 11 yeah, i like it.lucas and ice are my favorite. hope u update soon |
 AngelQt82217 2006-02-22 . chapter 11This chapter just seemed to be a bit rushed... But i liked, so glad that Ice finally came back! Man i thought i was going to get ta c the fight when ice got there. You have to UPDATE SOON! |
 Anastata 2006-02-01 . chapter 1UPDATE! |
 JMJones 2005-12-02 . chapter 10This story rocks! :D |
 destroyed perfection 2005-11-06 . chapter 9this is really good. faye has a brother eh? interesting. where is hera and athena and...demeter..and hades. ooh. hades...and poiseidon...I'll stop rambling now. Kepp on writing and update as soon as you can. |
| Anastata 2005-10-25 . chapter 9 YAY! you updated i'm soo happy now. Update soon i want to read more. |
| AngelQt82217 2005-10-12 . chapter 9 this is cool... Its interesting how you chose to describe zeus... Not a bad thing definately not.. its just interesting! And i can't wait for your update... |
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