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| Sarah-Brighteyes 2005-04-22 ch 1,  | abuseWow how whimsical. This poem reminds me of childhood. I think everyone can relate to that one toy that just sent their imaginations flowing and when you see it again, your memories are all over the place. Good piece. The flow and imagery is great. Bravo. |
| Beautifula 2004-12-06 ch 1, | abuseThat's a really nice poem. |
| Getuie 2004-11-10 ch 1, | abuseWow... This was stunning... The last two lines definitely thumped me on the head |
| CancerianQueen 2004-08-11 ch 1, | abuseOhh, this confused me! I think that's what you wanted, right? O.o It's so great how it makes you think something else... well, it did to me anyway! He he! ^_^ Cya round! *wink* Cancerian Queen |
| laughter at the funeral 2004-08-08 ch 1, | abusei think this is good...i love the symbolism of the doll...and how you used it to put the sentimental theme...it is really good...oh and pls..if u have the time pls..review some of my works..thanks... |