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| Amelia Carr 2005-01-07 ch 1,  | abuseo...nice work. as for the title, i dunno...maybe 'so wrong, yet so right'? |
| Ashley writes bad poetry 2004-09-15 ch 1, | abusehmm..i like this and the way it's formatted. The format of it, helps you delve deeper into the poem and understand the meaning. Very sad, but powerful imagery. NICE. As for a title, how bout 'Make it feel Nameless'. It just seems to fit. The poem is so profound, that you don't want it to be overshadowed by the title. Don't use my title, it's bad. haha - Ashley |
| suey and liuey 2004-08-11 ch 1, | abusei think i know what this is abt n im not liking it... but the poem is great it's the subject tht's freakin me out... :S |
| Kiran S 2004-08-08 ch 1, | abusewow. this is great. im not sure whut the titel cud be. hmm...k seriosly i hav no clue! im really bad at titles. lol. but again, this was very well written. great job! kiran |
| Fabian Cortez 2004-08-08 ch 1, | abuseHow about "Disenchanted" as a title or "The Flow" this is very well written and engrossing throughout. Well Done Keep Writing! F.C Your welcome to check out some of my works if you like. I'd welcome your thoughts. ^V^ |