I remember when you told me about this. The weirdness of it for you.D.

Wow. I like this one too. It's... him... simple yet strong.

another really beautiful poem. i will definitly make the promise to myself to read more of your poems later... they are so good.. but now i have a head... andi think i am going to take a nap or something.

Beautiful. Makes me think of another Jacob too..

Very creative very well writtena and very simple...Few words explained a lot

heyy... this is a good poem. But one thing, it might be just me, but your phrasing of your verses could be less"scattered" Im not sure if thats your intention but it seems that the too scattered words make the readers harder to understand. as in harder to understand what you are talking about. But in all, great poem. Write more fiction stories though. GO!

Beautifully written; I could picture every moment as if I were there.
Outstanding!
Keep Writing!
F.C

intresting...i like it

wow. this is a very unique poem. never read anything like it. ur a really talented writer and use strong words in your poems. i love it! keep it up!
kiran

good poem.

Haunting image of being possessed by a scratch on a wall representing a couple unknown. Nicely done.
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