Wow, that was an awesome story. I dont know why but i love it. And i am one that dosent believe in love between ppl. Wow.

Good tragedies are filled with irony. Good golly, I wanted to weep and laugh at the same time by the end of the story. I believe you did a phenomenal job -- especially with the four distinct parts where your concise style just utterly blew me away.

Wonderful well-written piece with a killer ending.