“I cannot face the world. Not yet. I need to learn more about myself, and my magic. I will not find that within the capitol.”

I found this line corny.

Also, Kirona's mom calling her "my master of the storm" also made me die inside a bit.

Haha, that's a bit harsh. But I did think it was a bit Serina. I understand you wrote it late. It's okay. =D Just telling you what I think. o.o;

I love the Xantos monologue. "Plus, I can make rope!" That made me happy. =D

Hmm. I liked the chapter a lot, but the beginning was a bit shaky. I can't quite put my finger on it. >_>

hoorah! that was sad, but fun to read. i suck at reviewing, tho, so... anyway, way to go! ^^!

O NOES! SELFISH YOUNGER SIBLINGS! NU!1oneoneone. Anyway ... FINISH THE DAMN STORY! And I might suggest you go back and change the details we discussed ... I'll be putitng up Xantos' past sometime soon. =D Luv ya, and you ROCK! =D

wow another good story from a beautiful young goddess i am enjoying it plz continue with your writings and don't forget heavens chosen few that one is worth finishing.

I review a lot! It's just that fp eats my reviews. So let me summarize. THE LAST THREE CHAPTERS WERE GREAT! KEEP WRITING OR I WILL NOT GIVE YOU THE SKY HARBOR CD!

XD Yay for Xantos! ::dances:: For some reason, when Xantos was like: "No. It's going to rain within 10 minutes." in the last chapter, that stuck me as funny. ::shrug:: Anyways . . . KEPP GOING!! Or I'll be foreced to have you mob assassinated by Kryst and Aycan. XD
Kryst: Gladly. As soon as this LAME excuse for a MAN gets some DUCT TAPE
Aycan: Excuse me? I don't see YOUR duct tape . . .
Kryst: Bah. YOU'RE the evil overlord. I'm just a fighter for hire. You have large castles to store duct tape in. I don't.

OH! I like this one - quick, upload the third chappie! I NEED to know what happens! I need to!

OH! I like it! There's more, right? There had BETTER be! *giggles* In any case, this was technically perfect, and I LOVED LOVED LOVED the descriptions. So nice!

Ooh . . . Very well written! I liked it. Okay, I will e-mail you soon and tell you about Xantos' past. Not much to tell. I'll skip over the minor details that aren't important. Well, I think I might type Greava . . . Then again, I might not. Who knows?

Totally awesome...
Briliant talent andrea Love you lots ryan