Nice.

thats sad you can deffinitly feel the pain there

very nice... a few spelling errors, though!

This is really good I Like it a lot

In those first few lines your imagery was so well I could actually see the scenery. That rarely happens for me. I'm glad to see you're consistent with your style without ever getting boring. I'd say this poem shows a lot of improvement, even.

This one was pretty good but I still don't think it was one of your best. good job, though!

Very good and interesting to read!