|Reviews for You|
| TCGanimefan357 10/31/05 . chapter 1
| lime215 4/29/05 . chapter 1
thats sad you can deffinitly feel the pain there
| wantedINheaven 11/2/04 . chapter 1
very nice... a few spelling errors, though!
| morbid obession 8/28/04 . chapter 1
This is really good I Like it a lot
| Blackout the Swordsman 8/13/04 . chapter 1
In those first few lines your imagery was so well I could actually see the scenery. That rarely happens for me. I'm glad to see you're consistent with your style without ever getting boring. I'd say this poem shows a lot of improvement, even.
| Faerie Corpse 8/8/04 . chapter 1
This one was pretty good but I still don't think it was one of your best. good job, though!
| depressed elf 8/8/04 . chapter 1
Very good and interesting to read!