You have found the right words... It was beautiful.

I like the way you write, it's very descriptive and you seem to use the right words.
I like how you say your feelings, but don't really say them straight forwards (did that make sense?) I was able to comprehend what you were trying to say, which was this was a person you liked, but you couldn't find the right words to describe them. This is something that I would like to write a poem about, but can't because everytime I try it doesn't make any sense. But you were able to do it, so great job!
Hope to see more of your writing in the future!
-SilveOcean

I like this poem a lot. Somethetimes I become frustration when I can't find vocabulary that doesn't do the subject justice. I think you did a nice job of illustrating that.