That was so deep...

Wow... you never cease to amaze me Andrea! This poem is absolutely amazing!

I really liked this. You are extremely good with meter and rhythm, the words just sound so great together. Here are my favorite parts:
"Sick affliction
Summer addiction"
"Scratching, biting
Grinding, sighing
We are fighting
For this night"
Well done.

wow so deep! i noticed that ur 4th paragraph all starts with 's'. great poem!

Awesome alliteration in points. You also create great imagery.

Oh I love this. The poem is very mesmerizing and has a bit of a restless tone. Finely written and wonderful. - Sever Sky