Very good use of metaphors. I liked it.

This subject could easily become cliche, but you keep it going nicely. The imagery was pretty, and it had the tone of a lullaby (almost). Keep Writing!

I guess that is a unicorn to you.

I think I have a weakness for unicorns. I liked this poem! A few of the lines didn't flow well, I thought the last stanza felt stifled almost in the end. But I also liked the imagery, it was very nice.

very nice! excellent use of metaphors, they set the scene quite well.

such a lovely poem. if it hadn't been for the title, i wouldn't have known it was about a unicorn. the verses are so subtle, as are the descriptions and hints you drop.

marvelous work

Very descriptive writing. I like it. Beautiful.

Hey The poem is awsome. I like that it doesn't have a set way to go. it doesn't always rhyme which doesn't bother me one bit. I think poetry should be judged on how it feels rather than actual words. I hope that makes sense. I did find one thing though. The poem kind of hangs at the end like its is not finished.o ther then that great poem.

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sorry to spoil a good poem... but i think this goes into the poem section rather than the original fiction.

Just wanted you to know

-Conrath

i like it a lot, the poem is lovely as the unicorn i'm sure.. one thing i noticed is that it doesn't really seem to end. but anyway, this is mighty enjoyable.

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful...

i liked it! very sweet.

That was a beautiful poem! I love unicorns, and that describes how i think of them perfectly! you should wrte more of these!

-Unexpected as the summer storm
And rages like it too.-
Gorgeous opening sentance. I love it. It really sets the tone.
-Drowning one in it's warmth-
This should be "Drowning one in its warmth". "Its" isn't a contraction in this case.
Overall, it has great imagery, and I like it. However, the flow seems a bit broken and jumpy through part of it.
Keep up the good work!
Jessica

I really liked the poem. The imagery was really good. I loved all the comparisons. I could envision the unicorn very well. This is one of the better poems I've read in a while.