This is really interesting Sars! I like it...

Aw - that was cute.

But, sigh, I suppose you're gone now anyway. Real-life? Work? College? Maybe you'll visit again someday - and maybe you'll even get the writing bug again. You'd be good at it...

Ooh, this is fun. Definatly write more, its not very often at all one sees a plot like that. Alot of people are afraid of them for some reason, lol. I applaud you, keep going I am eager to read more!

~Jak

You really should have continued writing this... It held quite some promise, and I'm sure your writing skills have improved since.Such a shame...

Oh. This is good. Keep posting up chapters, the story captures my interest. =D It's very unique.

Hmm... Blue Fairy can be from both AI and Pinnochio. Anyway. This is an interesting story. ^_^ Scratch that, 'interesting beginning'.

You are more distrubbing then I thought, *sigh* I really don't know what to do with you.
Well, it's from and interesting veiw point and very well writen, poor Arkruss!
Later,
~Ffuffy~

Well, I don't know what they hell you were thinking again, but I have a feeling it will live up to whatever warped-ness you come to write. I'll continue reading, if just to get more confused.

Huh... Really haven't read anything like this... Ever. Well, unless you count Pinoccio, but he was a lively puppet, not a dog in love with the guy who controlled the strings. The summary could use a lot of work. Original names though, likin those. Good work on capturin' how a dog thinks, (and I mean that as an honest compliment, not an insult). All in all, I'll keep up with it to see how things turn out. I hope the dog/boy isn't REALLY young, because that just wouldn't be right...