I love it! Greatly described and worded!

We all have our inner demons. Whether they're locked up deep within our souls or out in the open, only we truly know. Excellent writing.
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And for your poll, I liked "Chloe Carpenter" better than the one you have now.
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Regina O.B.

Wow Wren, this is really good. Lets seem my favorite part is probably the very begining how you express that the demon has a PLAN. ~giggles~ I like very much!

WOW! Just... WOW! I can't begin to describe how absolutely amazing this is. Seriously.

terrific.
a majestic, beautiful,
terrifyingly eerie
piece of work.
keep it up.