Wow. Powerful. I hope the she dies, but you survive.

I liked this. Reminded me so much of my friend Martha. Please keep up the great work! ~DansMandy

Well that's highly depressing...

whoa girl...this one is POWERFUL! Is there any connection between whats behind this and you fainting while trying to hit a pinata? YOu know you can always talk to me if somethings up. K? I'm praying for you girl, hang in there!
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That's so saddening. I really like the emotional terrifing stuff. I wish I could write poems like that... R&R my stuff if you're bored.

It makes me twist inside to read this. It's very good, sounds like it was written in a frenzy of haste and hopeful desire to escape. I'd like to say I understand because I sometimes feel as though a She other than me has grabbed hold of my heart and won't let me be.

It's an interesting piece really and I particularely liked the end. Liked the bit of dark feeling too. Good job.

Wow. That was...interesting. I liked it, interesting vibe. Good job, keep it up. Peace.

Emotions raw, stated with conviction and clarity. Difficult task, well done. —m—