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| GlueStik 2004-10-27 ch 1,  | abuseLike a kaliedescope, made of hand blown glass. That line definitely got to me. very good. Thanks for the reviews too. Jamie |
| Trinny B 2004-10-24 ch 1, | abuseAww...this is really sweet. I like the way you've written it. Pretty original rhyme scheme. Trins x |
| sins-pride 2004-08-13 ch 1, | abusehey..haha.its rely good..im feelin a lil bit flatterted here...ahha..but anyway..i still loveu ok..as a friend..-=p..muacks. |
| Manuel Fajar 2004-08-09 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, any man would love a woman that would write this for him. BTW recommend "off my feet" and "off to sleep" —m— |