that was really good

Hm, perhaps the format is not perfect, but it is still good work. Nice job.
Favorite part: "The smokey air that comes at night..." the last line. - Very nice ;)
Keep writing!
~Kristy

Excellent poem! I loved it and I especially liked the line "The smokey air that comes at night...". Smokey air, that's awesome. Keep on writing!

The format is stuffed, but I like this. My favourite line is 'crisp grey mornings'. Post more.
Stones decay, words last
Nick