Rating: 9
Stars: 4 1/2
From: Nephthys
Comments: It was really pretty, it was beautiful. I would switch "red and orange" to "orange and red" then it would sound more poetic, but that's just me. The letters "W" and "E" are very poetic as well (to me, at least), just some advice that NOBODY understands. I don't think you need any rhymes, but it may have helped you get that extra "half-star" and raised your approval rating from me. Nice job, though.

Now why can't I be at the beach right now? *sigh* Excellent poem though, nice descriptions!

Ah, peace until the next wave. Very tranquil, nice imagery.
Stones decay, words last
Nick