I like the feeling to this, and feel the chorus as I'm reading, it sings in your head even without having the access to the music. Nice work!

i rEmEmBeE dA daI u r0tE DiS uP. i wAs wAtchIn u oUt oF mAi wInd0w. u wrote dIs bUt DeN u g0t stuck. i waNTed t0 hElP y0u n l0vE y0u. BUt mAI gUrlFrIeNd wOUld hAvE g0tTeN mAd dAt i hAdN't t0lD hEr i wAS wAtcHiN j00.

i wATch j00 AlL da tYmE. i dInk j00 r HAwTdAyUm.wOUld j00 lYk t0 bE mAi ** or hO?

we cOuLd hAve hoUrs oF fuN doIn thIngs.

I like this one but it's not as good as your Hero song. Good work and I hope you keep writing I look forward to new pieces of work. love ya Kaylee

all i can say is... I LOVE IT! ok... moment is over. I liked the lines in the chorus:

"Got to put the missing piece in/And be whole again just like Adam and Eve,/Ya gotta make a connection"

I really like at the end you say: "and Luv, i hope it's you"... it fits and it helps that i'm a girl and it feels like your talking to me even tho i know you aren't.

great job =)

it is sad that you left FP.. they lost a great talent.

*Silent Writer*

Thank you for your review on "Love"

Thanks so much for all the reviews... I am trying to use all the help you have given me, so PLEASE continue to R&R my poems... I would review this song but I bet you already know its awesome... Thanks again!

Sounds good. ^^ I'd like to hear it actually played, cuz I think it would be really good.

oh goddess, if you don't stay i will be oh-so-very sad! Whatever happened, please don't let it get to you. I REALLY liked this...it reminds me of myself.

OMG please stay, i love this, and i love your work.. i dont know if FP is gonna fix that screwball who copied ur work,.. but STAY!

Ooh, I like this a lot. :) Excellentae!

I really like your writing, it's good.As for you staying on the site, thats up to you really. But dont let the flamers get to you. They're not worth it, you know? Its no one's choice but your own whether you continue to post on here or not, just dont let anyone stop you from writing. :)Wow...that went a bit too long...anywhose. Good job, and good luck.

Hey. First off I liked the song. Your not a bad writer for all and all. But that doesnt change what I came here to say.

You can bash my poetry. You can bash my skills. Thats your right as a fellow writer.However.

You cannot bash someones life worth. I peresonaly dont like Jane. I find her to be silly, crass, immature, down right agrivating even. But that doesnt give me the right to say the kinds of things you guys have been saying.

"Your life is meaningless, you should go kill yourself..."

"You dont matter you are crap I would had you the knife myself if I could..."

etc.

That is unnaceptable. Tell me what makes her life worthless. Tell me what give you the right to say that it is worthless. Tell me what gives you the right to say who derseves to live and who should die.

Tell me what gives you the right to judge.

Simply, Alice.

i guess everyone hates the jane **. she's a **tard.

me: o babyyou: please touch me there dont go!me: touch you where?you: (you place my hand on your dirty **)oh it smells bad but thats the way i like it uhuh uhuh i love kc and the sunshine bandyou: dont stop!me: oh stinky my playa hand is strongyou: i wanna ewat ur ** with masjked potaotoesthis aint no pimp myu rudepimp my compuiter plalank .g., .,m

This is wicked! I really enjoyed reading it!
Also I agree that Rob Thomas can write a song and a hell of a good one! ;)
Anyhoo post something new soon!

I DO have a bit of trouble defining the beat, rhythm, and style, but it's still stunning lyrics. I'm guessing my difficutly is due to my own stupidity, because obviously everyone else gets it, lol. Keep writing.