Love the melody of it.D.

Wow, this is amazing. You have a very beautiful mind. Keep at it, hon.
-Aeglos (Isil Rose)

this was a great poem

Very powerful and the stinging hurt oozes through every word and lines. I feel this to the very core. Excellent work.

Wow...you're a stunningly talented writer...I loved this piece, everything about it is amazing; the format, the repetition, the wording (especially the painful parapet alliteration), and especially the final lines...*adds you to her favorites*
Your newest fan,
.:Jalisco-Psyche:.

I liked this piece- I felt the emotions behind the writing very vividly, and I think you're very talented!

Very good. Thanks for reviewing my poem.