bien

I like it...it's really good... i like dark poems and such anyways good job...

Very interesting poem...a like the wording used in it alot.
DarkSorceress

that certainly was not crap. it was very well written.
~Mel

*recovers from coughing fit* complete crap?!?! You have no idea! This is amazing! It's really good, I love the last two lines and I'm glad you figured out the stanzas and stuff cos that made it all the more effective. Brilliant! Keep it coming!

I love this! Really effective. Keep writing

Cool! You do realise that you are far to prolific when it comes to writing poetry hmm? :) Wish I could turn them out that fast! Still, we all have our moments I suppose...

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