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| Tired-of-Tears 2005-08-18 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a beautiful poem and i can relate |
| godsjoke1 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseWow i like this poem a lot i hope you keep it up you never know when it might get some ones eyes or other things |
| A-Train 2004-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. That was really good. I'm not usual a fan for poetry but that was awesome. I can't write poetry so that was REALLY good. It was so...deep too. It was the best poem I've ever read. Great job! |
| Live2Create 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Great rhythm to it. I think you should put it on the board...I think everyone else will like it too. Mystery-Chick |
| MyVeryOwnDreamland 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abuseits really good write more |
| DarkLoveGoddess54CryptKeepe... 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! I know, I've been ignoring the original stuff for a while, but I'm trying to come up with something good. In fact I may even do a sequil to one. But that's besides the point, Really good poem, loved it. |
| Gothic Spook 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI love it! The repetition works very well and gets the point across ever more! Well done! |