Hey there. I've just finished reading chapter two, and I feel compelled to ask: Do you know what words mean?
Don't get me wrong, it's a charming story, but heavy editing, with a dictionary on hand, might be in order.

Hmm.. hello, and I must say that I'm really enjoying this story. I ran into your fanart on another website, and the boys (and in some cases millenia old men) were so gorgeous that I just had to know the story behind them. So, now that I've tracked that down, I'll be keeping an eye on this! I also looked at some of your pictures on the DeviantArt website, and I've got a question: are the Season representatives always female, while the elements always male? I think that's an interesting split. And thus far in the fic, we haven't seen any mentions of Fire, Lightning, or Thunder yet, even though you clearly have those characters very well planned out, down to the relationships that they will be in. I hope to meet them here soon!

yay! Finally an update! I'm so happy!::drool:: and I don't mind if they are the main focal points of AtE, it's all good XD

all I can say is.. "aw!"! ^_^! XD lol .. I'm such a lower.. hehe.. anyhow.. >.O I couldn't make out the Yong jiu part... of the wo ai ni thing.. =/ I assumed it to be .. I'll love you forever, but @_@ lol somehow I couldn't get the pronounciation to work in meh head... *sighs* .. bah.. I must be getting rustier.. X3... lol... anyhow.. ^_^ me shall be waitint for more of your story =3! tis good ^_^!

X3 rawr.. my brain's too fried to think of anything creative, but I did like this chapter much.. hehe.. so sweet =3 ... yeah.. see .. lame review for you T_T sorry.. XD

god I really loved it! ^_^ hehehe i love forever yours part 2! *glomp* god you are talented

Aww...Lolita can be so brutal, no? :{{ Poor Bryhn. Alas, I wanna read the next chapter, and you know it. Enyle's past sounds really interesting, and it gets really emotionally painful in this to see Toro(*chuckles*) so insecure. *hugs him* But of course, I'm absolutely bouncing my feet here waiting for the next chapter! And who's this new roomate? :3~~

XD !! ee! cliffhanger.. thingie.. sorta! bah! O_O lol >< hehe can't help but feel sorta bad for Brhyn.. >>;; he feels unworthy ;.;!! awz.. hehe XD well anyway.. ~_~ the chinese words and stuff was really interseting to read.. er.. or attempt to >_>;; *sighs* .. I can't.. read chinese stuff anymore x.x;; I'm such a pathetic excuse for where I came from hahah XD ! lol *cough* ^^ well it's a great chapter.. =3 definitely can't wait for the next one >.>; instead of all ready XD ? ... k that's all.. ^__^; laters!

Nice story, very detailed and I loved the bloodshed. I think that was my favourite part. I hope this isn't the end because that would be sucha bummer. If you're wondering how I got your story, I'm from DeviantArt. ^_~

hello! ^^ hehe This is quite interesting! Very nice on the descriptions and vocab use ^_^ heh .. um .. I did want to mention that the italics tabs didn't work.. I don't know if it's my browser or not.. er well anyway lol XD i think it's cuute... I'm such a dork -_-; blah. I wanna see more of this *pokes*... XD Trebic reminds me of Raenef..>.>;; he does..! the whole.. girlyness..blonde..thing.. XD yar.. I like it lots ^^; oh and um.. I was slightly confused about the small figure from the skylight thing.. ah well... maybe it'll be explained later..?k, hope you don't find this Review annoying ^_^!;;

Bwee! That was a great beginning! And what are you talking about?! Saying you can't write fight-scenes? Seriously. *nibbles*