Good poem. You have a powerful message, and good writing form.

Wow...i really liked this one, its a great poem.

good I could picture it and it was so real and amazing. i hope to see more of your poetry in the near future. Please R/R some more of my poetry! TY!

Good job. :) Very touching, and good word choice.

wow very moving. i felt like i was part of the story, so real. great job.

as usual these poems are toucvhing. keep up your work

very moving work...excellent write.