Wow, what a powerful last chapter!! I'm absolutely amazed by the Nightscape's description and the power that Viktor got! Lol, I'm also glad that Lindsey didn't die...I love it when the soothesayer peoples are wrong. But yes, wonderful ending, great story!
Hillary

Wow, another great chapter! Ooh, I love the way Lindsey killed Alain, I want a whip like that! Mwaha, anyways...Is Lindsey gonna die? No!! Lol, I can't wait to read the last chapter.
Hillary

Very nice chapter. I love Lindsey...so many pretty weapons, lol. Actually, I really love her outfit. I'm so jealous cause I do a terrible job describing outfits. Ah, the suspense is already building up, I cannot wait!
Hillary

I remember this ^^ Lol, this sounds like a great story already! I love your characters! Hm, I noticed a couple things throughout this chapter...if you want, I can go back and concrit it? But regardless, I can't wait to read more, the plot is starting wonderfully :)
Hillary