A very interesting picture. It sort of asks the reader to fill in the blanks by just presenting this one moment in time with lots of relationship things going, almost completely devoid of any real description. Yet I can see the players' expressions. Very nice.

I like this. If I remember, I'll be reading more of the stuff here. Cool.

perfect acrostic for saturday. kudos to you.

hm, the conversational tone really did it for me

nice poem

very nice, very nice indeed...i like alot of your stuff... =^.^=