heh, cute! this story's definatly got a lot of potential!

Ohh wow, that's very well written. I hope you'll continue writing it =)

i love this story. your writing is so good and i really like the characters.
can't wait to see what happens, update soon!

Sasa... I love you. ^^
I really, really like this story. Moreso than your others (which were all also quite wonderful). Therefore, I'd love you a little bit more (if that's possible) if you... updated! ^^
xMegan

jeebus that was cute! I love your style and the characters, I can't wait to read more of you stuff! please update soon!

Wow, this is truly compelling. I like your characters already, and the setting you've created. That one scene was also very hot, despite the fact that you are a tease. I'll be waiting for more. ;)

Aww, that's really lovely. I like the slightly Romeo and Juliet air of it, the whole forbidden love thing. And I love Johnnie's mother! She's great.

Johnnie's mom is super cool!! I love this story. Of course, if the make out scene were a little longer and a little more...complete, I'm sure I'd love it even more. ^.^

Blah, I forgot to review the first chapter, gomen, Sasa. ^^;;
I like the story. ^^ It's very good, and your writing is beautiful, as always.
o.O Johnnie reminds me a lot of you. Should he? o.o
xMegan

This is really good. I love the way it's written. Not much dialouge, but enough words to explain the actions and feelings of them all. It seems kind of simple by looking at it, but when you read it, you see how much better it gets. It's realistic and you've made it seems so. Like reliving the moments in a memory. It has that I did this, but not how you think I did it feel to it. That surprise twist. It's very good and I'll be happy for the update.

Okay, I read this, loved it, went to read more stuff, came back to review this, THEN realised it was you.
And I love this. I really really really love it. Lots. I'm sorry I can't be more articulate :) This is really good though. There's something about the way it's written - not quite disjointed, but kind of - that just MAKES it. It's beautiful. And I love the little bits of dialogue just slipped in there.
Glad to see there's going to be more :)

Hey, this is great. Religion can so often be like that, dictating and controlling, but completely not in the real world.
I do love gay romance. Please continue this!
Oh, and I found this story in the fiction writers LJ community.
A thouroughly enjoyable read. Thanks.
~Synth