Lovely, I specially love the last line of the middle verse:

Only one thought and it's you I'll become,

~starry

very well done, nicely written. i likes a lot. so much like my dad it sounds, great poem!

This was excellent. It ended sort of abruptly. You could've written verses more about this. Made an excellent song. I like what is here tho.

Wow . . . all your poems I've read so far have been really, really good . . . this is amazing! Where do you get all your insperation from??