|Reviews for If he was destroyed|
| Aquaria 9/6/04 . chapter 1
Go on, continue this if you want people to keep their interest in this story, you need to have written more. It's ok for a start but it's kind of like you never even finished starting the story. I suggest you finish the starting at least and then repost this or post the rest of the start the "second" chapter. just trying to give constructive criticism.