this is so good you are great. please write more. Thank you for reviewing my stories

Amazing talent. Very nice imagery and I LOVE the ending. You have a strong sense of story telling.

Thats so good! I love your poems! I have read a bunch of them, and they're all great! I think you might like some of my stuff. Try either Dark Mistress 27 or Laelae. Write more!
Lae

I love this poem, it has to be one of my favourites of yours.
I can relate and I can feel the emotion flowing through the poem.
You are an inspiration to me

As wonderful a work as your others. And you are strong, to write about the issues you adress. Reviews are not enough. You deserve a dozen yellow roses for your talent, and courage.

a true poet you are.

wow..i like it!..keep writing!

Brilliant piece of work
Natz

Very powerful and sad. I can relate to it alot. I ran away from the abuse of my mother and I remember my brother and sister begging me to stay..But i couldn't stay i had to get away. The pain was to much. Damn, I just inspired a poem. LoL anyway i love you're work very powerful.

Once again, I'm at a loss of words. I love it..

great narrative going in this poem!
well done!

I love it! Full of angst and pain. And the ending is kinda bitter sweat. Well done!

This was a great poem. You are a good poet.

I feel so many emotions while reading this piece
so well written
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