THe is a beautifully written poem. Keep up the good work.

oh i loved that last line. this poem is really good. i cant wait to find myself. i cant wait to find my soul mate. i do realize though that i am only 17... well almost 17 and i have plenty of time. best i can do is keep trying. the closest i have to a soul mate is my best friend. he is my heart. so sensitive and fragile i fell like i must protect him while in all actuality he is the only person keeping me alive. everyone says i have a crush on him... that i want more than i best friend from him... i say "no" but then i have to ask myself if i am in serious denial...i dont know i think i love him as a best friend and nothing more... i sure hope nothing more... that would be too painful... sorry lol i like giving long reviews... didnt mean to goet all personal i just cant help it... poems do that to me.. before i can fully appreciate it i have to relate in some shape way or form. all your poems i read so far are awesome. this one is no exception.

Original use of language and metaphor, you have a style that flows beautifully and conveys emotion well. Keep at it ;)

once again, great poem. just so many pictures you paint with words

the continueing(sp?) dream of the perfect man you could say... awesome poem... loved every word!

Again beautiful and very strong. You have so much feeling in your writing. I wish I had as much talent as you _. But still, you seem very sad. Ah, it is not my business to pry. You have so much talent, I just hope that one day you will have you faith again. I love the originality of your work, keep it up.

Very nice and sweet, one can feel it. I like it very much. Thanks for your review

I liked it. It was very positive and very hopeful and loving. I just read Naomi and this and I think you can write darker stuff slightly beter but definitely you can do justice to your happier emotions. Something I struggle to do.

great poem; especially loved:
and frozen
from the storms
that once lived against me like a husband.
wonderful use of language!

aw very sweet.. I liek it
thanks for your reviews!

Keep writting. This was a good poem