  DOOM ON YOU!!! 2007-01-08 . chapter 5 I reread it today. *Lowers steady gaze* I think you understand. But just in case you don't...
WRITE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! |
  Kas Kar ACE 2006-08-15 . chapter 14WOOT! You updated. I love you.Now that I'm done with that batch of nonsense, I love it. Nice twists and turns and the like. |
 ebonydragon 2006-06-21 . chapter 13Yeah! You updated. I kinda thought you had abandoned the story but I guess not. |
 Joanna Ja 2006-06-11 . chapter 13Man that took you forever. I almost forgot everything that had happnened. Anyway,good update ^_^ was Reen, Rain, or Rein, or what. Or was there something that I'm being blond about again? Anyway yeah, good update and update again soon! Semper fi |
| ebonydragon 2006-04-03 . chapter 12 OH MY GOD! I LOVE this wonderful story! You are doing a great job! Your characters are well written and shining brightly. Keep going, I can't wait for the rest of the story! |
| Megan 2006-04-01 . chapter 12 Now that I've finally gotten the chance to sit down and read your whole story (and not in Street Law)...I applaud thee. you're story is beautifully written. Just curious, does it end or will it continue? Either way it is quite good.Much Love,Megan |
 clair-a-net 2006-03-27 . chapter 12oh youc ant just leave her in the rain |
| Joanna Ja 2006-03-25 . chapter 12 Yay, an update! That was good! Ski better just swallow her pride. Anywho, I'm going to bed. Update again soon. Semper fi |
| clair-a-net 2005-10-29 . chapter 11 oh this is a really good story please update soon i was getting so into this story and then it jsut stops i have to find out what happens next |
| Joanna Ja 2005-10-17 . chapter 11 Lol, nice chapter! Please update soon!! Semper Fi |
| Kas Kar ACE 2005-10-16 . chapter 11 O_O Holy **. That was awesome Chauncy. Fabulous. Gold medal and sparkly **! |
| Joanna Ja 2005-10-13 . chapter 10 Good story! Please update soon! Semper Fi |
| Kas Kar ACE 2005-10-09 . chapter 9 No! Poor Ski. Thanks for making her better.Update ASAP, and send your chappies in for examination, young lady! *Looks pompous* |
| Nam Ghosthand 2005-09-05 . chapter 9 wow!! you're still alive? (lol)
I liked this new chapter but I got a little confused, who exactly is this person Reen? What does he want? How the heck does he know Christine and Keith? and other questions along those lines. Though I'm sure they will all be answered in time. ::smilies:: have fun writing the next chapter, and put it up soon! Untill next time, Nam. (Ps, please go read my story, I only got one review on the last chapter and I need some more constructive critism from someone who I consider a good writer!! ie, you.) |
| Kas Kar ACE 2005-06-20 . chapter 8 AH! Don't die Ski! AH!
Loverly chapter. *Shifty eyes* You need to send these to me to beta though. I command you! |
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