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| lemondrop 2004-11-23 ch 1, anon. | abusethe language in this one is very pretty, combined with the painful words...the effect is something morbidly beautiful. |
| Fabian Cortez 2004-08-23 ch 1,  | abuseEngrossing; intriguing and sad, yet empowered. Well Done to capture the complexities of this scene so well. KEEP WRITING! F.C |
| Silver and Suchan 2004-08-13 ch 1, | abuseClaps for elephant chimes, she's done it again! :D I liked it a lot... spoke to me. Not a lot of poetry does that anymore. |
| emerald raven 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abusevery nicely done! I love the way you portrayed everything...very very nicely done. Emerald Raven X |
| Hoshiko 2004-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it a lot... however makes me wonder what brought this on. Keep up the good work. Ja nai Hoshiko |
| Giraffe 63 2004-08-11 ch 1, | abuseA little forced rhyming, but overall not bad. I think it could use a little more fine-tuning to be a really wonderful poem, but I'm not sure what to suggest...Sorry. The word choice you've got here is really good, though. |