Very heartfelt and powerful. The message, I thought, was a strong one. Nicely, niicely done.

You're back! Yay! Prettiness.
Love the line "and no one questioned my motives for/losing track of my life to begin with/If they did, maybe things would, I don’t know/Turn out differently."
Good job.

Uhm, this is definatelly...interesting I guess is the word. Don't know if I really get it because the meaning wasn't quite as clear. Still pretty good but I don't think it's your best.