aw i like how she won't give up on love easily great job n keep it up

the word "perfection" was perhaps used too much, but it had a great idea in it.

This is good i really enjoy the rhyme scheme and i see a metaphorical fashion to it i love it!

Nice job, I can relate to that :-) Keep writing

Wow this is wonderful. I really like it. Sry my reviews suck tonight i got a cold and i'm tired. great work though.