|Reviews for Torn|
| Raven Gray 8/25/04 . chapter 1
wow great job it had a nice flow even without a rhyme scheme
| Emmytastic gal 8/19/04 . chapter 1
i love this poem... like you said it portaits many emotions and is still pleasant to read even though it has no rhyming scheme. Write on.
| WarriorHeart 8/14/04 . chapter 1
Wow... beautiful in all its woundful emotion.
| Leo 8/12/04 . chapter 1
Kick tail buddy you did great u aint gotta have rhythm u got skill
| Space-ghost-boy 8/12/04 . chapter 1
I like how the torn one is afraid to be free...It is life,isn't it?
| Written In Stone 8/11/04 . chapter 1
Wow there's so much behind this. So much pain and anger. I really like this. You remind me of an old me except ur way better at writing and all that stuff. And u've probably been through more then i have