*blinks* hm ... i'm not quite sure how i feel about this story ... hm...

i love how you put these words together. i get lost in your stories! great job :)

Woah. HOT. Delicios, but without being flamboyantly so.
And another thing I loved was the realism...
Great job.

Interesting. This is not the end, right? =/ I liked it. ^_^ I hope Angel's okay. -_-

...wow...
this is great slash kid... sexy
and it's written SO well, unbelievably realistic, i could picture everything you were writing...
Wow (again)
XOXO
Meg

Great story. Descriptive and slashy, the way i like 'em! Good job.

really like it update soon!

I like yuor story and think u should keep going

Okay...
Now, like all of your pieces, this is fantastic. But I can see a reason to dislike it, because I REALLY don't approve of infidelity. Not that I have experience to hate it by, it's just something that I really dislike. Otherwise, it's quite a thorough piece. Let me show you something though, as long as I'm here:
Chosen Love: 5
Simple Sweetness: 3
Beauty: 1
Release: 2
Beyond the Glass: 4
1 being the best. :). Keep up the terrific work!
Magz.

wow...thats intense... strange, I never read two guys gettin it on... it was interestng... I love your details.. and your writing... nice.

It's good, most people dont do the guy on guy thing but its good. I think you should develop this more. Have maybe Angel talk about his feelings of the night and possibly have him seek out Kevin again. That sort of thing but if not its still a good story