I just wish you could see life like me. I know I am older but that means nothing more than I have done more and had worse happen to me. But if I can see life as a wonderful thing I do not see why you can't.

i like it.

I love it, you have a lot of meaning and metaphor in this. Really powerful, your a talented writer when it comes to imagry and emotion in poetry. keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.