The Bus ride is such an extriguing story. it has art in it... for short it was done nicely. But Cath, keep making more horror stories...and do put your "The Vision" and " THe Wonderer" in here so many can read how well you write horror stories. and also your CHOLIE Oi! humana nana para makahuman nako og basa!

Rule of thumb: nothing is ever stupid. It's just a matter of enthusiasm you decide to put in it. It was a simple story, yes, but also had that very faint and creepy air about it that made it seem like it had the chance to break out and become something terrifying. However, you do have the talent. Remember that.