|Reviews for Dying Friendship|
| Werewolf Nighteyes 4/30/05 . chapter 1
I've felt this way once. The thing about friendship is that it fades eventually... Nice work here. Keep it up.
| Michael Dempsey 2/4/05 . chapter 1
Wow. This is fantastic. It works so well because it's short and grabs your attention. Well done!
| David Stephen 8/25/04 . chapter 1
Wow! This one was amazing! It flowed so nicely...*claps* I really like it!
| twilightwriter07 8/19/04 . chapter 1
This has happened to me before...nice haiku overall.
| MorbidMan 8/15/04 . chapter 1
Nice poem. I, myself, have not experienced this, but I figure it must be a powerful and confusing experience. Nice job. I got a new story up if you want to check it out, and one on the way.
This poem here does illustrate exactly why you are one of my favorite authors. And when are you gonna get back into horror writings? I look forward to your next horror story, if you'll write one, that is.
| Dracula Lord of the Vampires 8/14/04 . chapter 1
Good Haiku. However, when I said it out loud, the ending was a bit awkward. I'm not trying to be critical or a smartass, but to me, a writer of many haikus and tankas, this would have sounded better as a tanka. But, if you think it sounds right, then forget what I just said. But besides that, good job.
- Dracula -
| Meleny 8/13/04 . chapter 1
Aw, Cupcake. Sounds like a poem that makes people give you hugs when you read them. Tis good, I like it)
| Giraffe 63 8/13/04 . chapter 1
Ah, a beginning, a middle, and an end - All nice, and such a telling story in such a few amount of words. Great job.
| Derrick Edgar James 8/12/04 . chapter 1
Something I have lived time and time again. Great poem.
| IrinaPeace 8/12/04 . chapter 1
Ah, the story of my life. Very nice