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Reviews For: Dysphoria Euphoria

lilwickedfairy
2005-03-17
ch 1,
abusecouldn't have said it better myself adding to fav's
Jocelyn Raye
2005-03-03
ch 1,
abusewow that poem really hit me... i have insomnia too...it freaks out my mom so i told her the tylenol pm was working...but nothing works in this screwed up world...but you put into words what i feel every night...like theres another persin in your room, or your head, and they just wont leave until they take everything away...
happy thing
2004-08-16
ch 1,
abusevery nice
Twizzlers
2004-08-15
ch 1,
abuseThat's awesome. The poem I mean, not the feeling you're writing about. I know how that feels though. I really like this poem, too. It has good...flow. Nicely done. : )
William Winters
2004-08-13
ch 1,
abuseUgh...I've never had insomnia, but now I know what it feels like, thanks to this piece. Well Written! The only awkward point is where it stops rhyming for a few lines (that area after "minute" and ending with "glory"), but I guess that fits the disjointed mind-set of the condition.
Faithless Juliet
2004-08-12
ch 1,
abuseBreathtaking imagry and detail, I love it, keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.
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