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| lilwickedfairy 2005-03-17 ch 1, | abusecouldn't have said it better myself adding to fav's |
| Jocelyn Raye 2005-03-03 ch 1, | abusewow that poem really hit me... i have insomnia too...it freaks out my mom so i told her the tylenol pm was working...but nothing works in this screwed up world...but you put into words what i feel every night...like theres another persin in your room, or your head, and they just wont leave until they take everything away... |
| happy thing 2004-08-16 ch 1, | abusevery nice |
| Twizzlers 2004-08-15 ch 1, | abuseThat's awesome. The poem I mean, not the feeling you're writing about. I know how that feels though. I really like this poem, too. It has good...flow. Nicely done. : ) |
| William Winters 2004-08-13 ch 1, | abuseUgh...I've never had insomnia, but now I know what it feels like, thanks to this piece. Well Written! The only awkward point is where it stops rhyming for a few lines (that area after "minute" and ending with "glory"), but I guess that fits the disjointed mind-set of the condition. |
| Faithless Juliet 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abuseBreathtaking imagry and detail, I love it, keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |