I know how much that must have been killing you because it was killing me.
This a great poem!

its good to see that you're writing again. great poem by the way, though it was very sad. hopefully things will change for the better.

Wow, this is nice. Nice rhymes and all that.
Rock on!
XCherryX

Officially...I'm bouncing in my seat clapping my hands...chanting he's back! He's back. Unofficially I'm bawling like a baby because this poem was so sad, and it's so beautiful. It clearly expresses loss, and heartbreak. A feeling I get way too often, so in a way I can relate to this. I'm glad to see that you've posted this. This poem flowed so smoothly, and the rhythm was amazing. Keep up the great work. TTFN.

I no the feeling. Very well put, i love it. please r r my poems x