Your first song beats my first song lol . . . this was pretty good, I enjoied reading it. And LP does rock ;)

It's so sad, it's like someone's made such an impact on your life you just cant let it go no matter how much you try.
Great work *claps*
love and bubbles
* *Laura* *

its so sadd.. but i really like it how you use paint n stuff. good job! it makes somethin.. different and unique about this...

nice, i like it a lot. wow.