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Reviews For: Stop
Goldensong 2004-08-18 . chapter 1
Short and depressed! Good stuff! Liked your repetion of the whole so... I run thing. Gave it something a bit different and made the last stanza stand out more!
Artificial Refuge 2004-08-13 . chapter 1
Very powerful. Love the repetition of 'I run' and then 'I stop' at the end.
ColdFrost 2004-08-12 . chapter 1
Very good. Love the repetition.
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