Wow...I like your intelligent writing style and use of similes!!

xoxo LlaMa

nice...are u gonna continue this somehow?

Cool! Have to admit though, found the whole poetic devices a tad heavy. Liked the way you ended it though.

I like this one! I also like the thing about underlining an important word without a straight ruler :). Yay for suicidal stories!

i liked that story, not the dying part though. good similes and metaphors. keep writing
*mEgAn*

A slight OD on the similes and metaphors, but stil intense. Yay for unhappy story lines